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Band 5+: You have etra concert tickets but you can't go to the concert. You want to give them to your friend.write a letter to him What kind of concert it is Why you cant go

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Hi rajesh

I hope you are doing well my young chum! I am writing this letter to inform you that I have 4 passes of honey singh concert, and I am not able to attend that concert.That is why I assumed that you can visit the event instead of me.

The concert is organized by a YHC group, which has been providing outstanding events every year in which, honey singh will come for a rap song presentation.There will be approximately 2000 people over there.It would be an amazing night for you.

I am doing my job at tata group and I have a meeting on this same day it is intricate for me to present in this concert.Generaly I do not miss any event but this is the circumstance where it is hard for me to chill those momonts.You can pick tickets from my house whenever you have time.

I wish your concert will be great

Yours lovingly,

Akashkumar

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The task is mostly addressed, but some aspects could be more clearly explained.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraphing. Grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate, but more precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors detract from the overall clarity and accuracy. Improvement in grammar is crucial.

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