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Band 6+: You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs Begin as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to find out about the LA fitness center near North York station.

I am pursuing my graduation from Sinica College and unfortunately, Our institute doesn’t have a physical activity facility at our place henceforth I need to locate elsewhere as I emphasize my physical fitness.

Firstly, I am keen to know about the infrastructure and range of equipment being provided for arm strengthening as well as muscle gain.

Secondly, I would also interested in knowing about the other facilities apart from the gym. Likewise, do we have the privilege to get a personal trainer? furthermore, do we have the scope of the sonar bath for body relaxation?

Lately, I wonder what kind of membership the club offers. Please help me with a brief about the membership plans. Do we have monthly and weekly passes available or do I need to I should opt for a long-term franchise only?

I would be obliged if could send the details to my mail.

I am looking forward to hearing from you!

Yours Faithfully,

Om Prakash

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by introducing the writer, expressing interest in the sports club, and asking relevant questions about the facilities, members, and costs. However, there are some minor lapses in content, such as not explicitly stating the reason for interest in the sports club and not providing a closing statement about the course at Sinica College.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some issues with paragraphing, and the transition between the second and third paragraphs could be smoother. Additionally, the use of cohesive devices could be improved for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some sophisticated word choices. However, there are a few instances of awkward or inaccurate word usage, and some repetition of words like 'facility' and 'club.' Consider varying the vocabulary more and using synonyms to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

There is a wide range of sentence structures used, and the overall grammar and punctuation are mostly accurate. However, there are some errors in subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence construction. Proofreading for these issues would improve grammatical accuracy.

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