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Band 5+: You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter ⚬ give details about the concert ⚬ describe how you won the tickets ⚬ explain why you've chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear Jeaqline

As you know, we are a big fan of korean boyband “Big Bang”. This year they will had an concert around the world and Indonesia will be one of the choosen country on their listed events. You know, we waited during 5 years for the boys an this is the moment to see them in real person.

Actually, last week I went to convenience store for buy some snacks, I choose the snack randomly but unpredictable I won two tickets “Big Bang” concert for free. But I have to go the center office of that store for claim it.

I know you will happy join me to the event, that is why I want to ask you to accompany me to attend the event.

Why don’t you come with me on Saturday, 09 September 2025, I will pick you up at eleven, so maybe we can have lunch before it.

Give me a ring if you willing to

Love,

Angel

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, providing details about the concert, how the tickets were won, and why the friend was chosen. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the letter is clear and fulfills the requirements of the task. To improve, focus on using more natural and accurate English.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body paragraphs addressing each bullet point, and a conclusion. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) would also enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more varied and precise language to express your ideas. For example, instead of 'big fan,' you could say 'ardent admirer' or 'devoted follower.' Also, ensure that your word choices are natural and idiomatic. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency (e.g., 'they will had' should be 'they will have'), subject-verb agreement, and correct article usage. Proofreading carefully before submitting your writing can help you identify and correct these errors.

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