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Band 5+: You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter ⚬ give details about the concert ⚬ describe how you won the tickets ⚬ explain why you've chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear Sehaj,

I hope you’re are doing well.

I’m writing to invite you to attend Diljit concert in Winnipeg.

The concert is on February 12,2026 at Princess auto stadium in Winnipeg.It will start at 5 in the evening.Moreover,it has been long we haven’t hang up together and this would be the best time to spend time with you.

You will be happy hearing that I have won these two tickets at my staff social at my work.There was auctions and I purchased the tickets to participate and luckily I won these two concert tickets.The moment I won tickets,the first person that came to my mind was you.

You will be the best company for me as it was your dream from childhood to attend Diljit’s concert and he is your favourite singer from beginning and I would be really like to fulfill your dream.Also,our vibes matches alot and we will have fun.

Let me know what you think!

Well,that’s all for now.Can’t wait to hear from you!

All the best,

Taran

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

concert: 4

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing relevant details about the concert, how the tickets were won, and why the friend was chosen. The information is presented clearly and sufficiently. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details to make the letter even more engaging and personal. For example, you could mention a particular song by Diljit that your friend loves or a specific memory related to his music.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider structuring your paragraphs more clearly around each of the points mentioned in the task: details about the concert, how you won the tickets, and why you chose your friend. Transition words could also be used more effectively to connect ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more varied and descriptive language. For example, instead of saying 'best time to spend time with you,' you could use a more specific phrase like 'perfect opportunity to catch up' or 'wonderful chance to create new memories.' Also, avoid repetition of words. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect the clarity of the letter. For example, 'I hope you're are doing well' should be 'I hope you are doing well,' and 'it has been long we haven't hang up together' is grammatically incorrect. Review basic grammar rules and sentence structures to improve accuracy. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct usage of prepositions.

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