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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a new city and would like to join a community center to participate in local activities and meet new people. Write a letter to the community center coordinator expressing your interest in becoming a member. You should include details about: - why you want to join the community center - what activities you are interested in - how you can contribute to the community.

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Dear guy!

I’m a new person who have moved to your city. At first, i feel very happy when i can live in a beautiful place like that. When I went around our city, i have seen many shops, restraunts and other things,… I think that i have fell in love with this city and wanted to become a member of community center. That is the reason why i wrote this letter for you. I hope my effort and my interest can make you have a good impression about myself.

Moreover, I am confident that i was a enthusiatic person. So if i can participate in community center, i will try my best to make our city become better. In my mind, i like planting trees, cleaning, setting up festivals,… I have many ideas to hold up some programmes for our community. I can help old people a lot of things like cooking, supporting, comunicating. I also would like to teach children study english and have more comfortable memories. In the other hand, planting trees is a good idea to enhance our city.

To the end, i think becoming a memner of community center is a great choice for me to closer with people hear and get on well with them. I will try to be hard working, friendly and spend all time contributing to community center.

New citizen.

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

community: 5

center: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The reasons for wanting to join, the activities of interest, and potential contributions are all mentioned. However, more detail and clarity would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's structure is somewhat disorganized. The flow of ideas could be improved with better paragraphing and clearer transitions between thoughts. The numerous grammatical errors further detract from the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is sufficient but not particularly sophisticated or varied. There is room for improvement in word choice and precision of language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact clarity and understanding. Improved grammatical accuracy is essential for a higher score.

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