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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I have seen your advertisement in a magazine and I am writing to you because I would like to be considered for the position you are offering.

Honestly, I really love to take care of small kids because it is very fun to watch how they play, the way they speaks apart from this how they eat.

On the other hand, Since I was 8 years old from that time I had a responsibility to look after my brother. It is because my parents were in abroad, so I had to look him, and also I had an experience how to treat them.Therefore, I would be suitable person to employ.Furthermore, I am a teacher and also I can provide home tuition for your child.However, a couple of months ago I moved to a new city, and currently I am jobless it would be grateful if you would consider me this position.

Finally, If I would have a leisure time I would spend it by doing part time job, and also I would help you on your daily basis household chores.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours Faithfully,

Ranjita Bishwash,

Word Count: 195

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
would: 7
because: 3
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Task Response

5
The letter addresses the main points of the task but lacks depth and detail in explaining why the writer would love the job, why they are suitable for the position, and how they would spend their free time in Australia. It would be beneficial to expand on these aspects to fully meet the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5
The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Consider organizing the content into more structured paragraphs to improve coherence. Additionally, linking words and phrases could be used more effectively to enhance cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5
There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are repetitive, and there are errors in word choice and collocations. To improve lexical resource, aim for more varied and precise vocabulary. Additionally, pay attention to using idiomatic expressions and phrasing more naturally.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5
The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical errors, especially in verb tense consistency and sentence construction. Work on improving accuracy by reviewing grammar rules and sentence formation.

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