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Band 7+: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 words.

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I am writing to express my strong interest in the advertisement I saw in ‘Around the World’ magazine for a nanny. With my background in psychology and a passion for working with children, I believe that I would be an ideal candidate for this open position.

I have a Bachelor’s degree in Psychology. Moreover, I am about to complete my Master’s degree with a focus on child education. During my Master’s program, I wrote two theses. Additionally, I am particularly into designing games for children that improve motor skills. And also, I always try to support their creativity. I am confident that I can provide a safe and fun environment for your child.

Furthermore, I am eager to experience the country’s culture, explore iconic landmarks like the Sydney Opera House, and discover hidden gems throughout Australia’s streets.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

Best Regards.

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Overall Band Score

7.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7.5
The letter effectively addresses the task by expressing interest, highlighting relevant qualifications, and outlining plans for free time. However, it could benefit from more specific details about the applicant's experience with children and how they would engage with the child's daily routine.

Coherence & Cohesion

7.5
The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphs flow logically, and the ideas are connected smoothly. However, the use of 'And also' in the second paragraph could be replaced with a more sophisticated transition.

Lexical Resource

7.5
The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using words like 'passion,' 'ideal,' 'eager,' and 'iconic.' However, some phrases could be more concise and impactful.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7.5
The letter displays a good command of grammar and punctuation. However, there are a few minor errors that could be corrected for greater accuracy.

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