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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I have seen an advertisement in magazine that you are looking for someone to live with along with taking care of your child. I am interested to apply for this job.

I like this job because it is my dream job that I really want to do. Especially, I love spending my time with childrens.

I can guarentee you that I am a suitable person for this job because I have completed by Bachelors in Health Care so, it makes me eligible for this job. Also I got 3 years of experience in taking care of children between the age group of 1-10.

During my free time I use to visit old age house whilei was in Australia. I used to chit-chat with the people living there and they are delighted to share their story with me. In old age house there are some of the orphan child who are left by their parents, I used to take care of them as well.

I am looking forward to hear from you.

Yours sincerely,

Rabina

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all aspects of the task. It clearly expresses interest in the job, highlights relevant skills and experience, and outlines how free time would be spent.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, making it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, affecting the overall clarity and fluency.

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