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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to this letter I have read your advertisement in an Australian magazine and I am interested in looking after your children. My name is Dulanjani Navodha. I am 23 years old. I study a University in London. I am interested in visiting Australia.

I love little children, I have younger sister and I had to take care of them whole my childhood. I study a university, specification as a teacher in the Kindergarten. I had lot of experience from the school band where I was apply the band leader of the children (the group aged apply 6-10). I apply started this job since my 12 years old. I have received certificate to take care of the children and the first avoid. I worked as babysitter for the last 4 years with apply children aged apply 3-8 years old. I have certificate C1 from English, French and Germen, I can teach child these languages if you want.

I would like spend my free time apply travelling and meeting the new people.

If my letter is interesting for you, Please let me know, I will be happy to meet you and your child.

Yours faithfully,

Dulanjani Navodha.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

apply: 6

children: 5

years: 4

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and organized for a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization and flow could be improved. Numerous grammatical errors disrupt the coherence and make the message difficult to follow at times.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but more precise and sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact. There are some repetitive phrases.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity and overall impression. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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