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Band 4+: You recently attended a training course for your work. You employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your to your employer. In your letter • Remind the employer what the course was about • Explain why the course was useful to you in your work • Suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you regarding a tranning which was taken place earlier this week.

On the first hand,the main subject of this tranning is about health and saftey awarness and implementation at thermal power plant.The venue was at chen one hotel lahore pakistan.In addtion the trainer was a quite professinal as well as his way of teaching is excellent.The core idea of that tranning is first aid at plant site in case of any incedent. It would be play a crucial role in our career.Moreover, its imporve our work effeiciency at work place and minimise injuries during operation and maintenance of our thermal station.Furthermore, now we able to handle any emergeny situation at our work site and home. They provide us a first aid kit which also useful.

On the other hand, some of our staff did not attent this session they missed a golden chance because they stuck in traffic and pretty late as well as many of them not related our plant.

I would kindly request you to arrange another session for them.I hope you will look into this matter promptly.

Yours faithfully,

Muhammad shabeer

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

tranning: 3

first: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the requirements of the task, reminding the employer about the course, explaining its usefulness, and suggesting why it might not be suitable for some colleagues. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall, the message is clear. To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and ensuring accurate grammar and word choice.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between points to enhance readability. For example, when transitioning to the reasons why the course might not be suitable for other colleagues, a clearer introductory sentence would help. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('tranning' instead of 'training,' 'incedent' instead of 'incident'). Expanding your vocabulary and ensuring correct spelling and usage would significantly improve this aspect. Try to incorporate more specific and varied language to describe the course content and its benefits.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('was taken place'), subject-verb agreement issues ('its imporve'), and awkward phrasing ('play a crucial role in our career'). Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofreading carefully and using grammar resources can help reduce these errors. Also, vary your sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical skills.

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