Letter

Band 6+: You recently attended a training course for your work. You employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your to your employer. In your letter • Remind the employer what the course was about • Explain why the course was useful to you in your work • Suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues

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I hope this letter finds you well.I am writing to give feedbacks on the recent course I participated in some days ago. This took place at Eko Atlantic event center,Lagos between May 14th and May 28th,2025 and was centered on Total Parenteral Nutrition.

I was elated at this opportunity to have more knowledge into feeding that by-passes enteral nutrition. As the pharmacist in charge the Surgery unit,this provides me with required knowledge that benefits my patients by contributing more effectively to patient care and also help facilitate the healing process.

However, I would not recommend this course for other colleagues in Out-patient and Accident and Emergency unit. This would be of no importance in their line of work nor equip them with necessary information needed to excel in their sub-units.

I am grateful and look forward to using this knowledge to the benefit of this hospital and overall,for patient wellness.

Yours faithfully,

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

knowledge: 3

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Task Response

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear reminder of the course's content, a detailed explanation of its usefulness, and a reasoned suggestion regarding its suitability for other colleagues. The response is well-organized, coherent, and uses appropriate language and tone for a formal letter to an employer. There are no omissions or lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the message is clear. The paragraphing is logical, with each paragraph addressing a specific point as required by the task. However, the introduction could be more direct in stating the purpose of the letter. Transitioning between the usefulness of the course and its unsuitability for other colleagues could be smoother with a clearer linking phrase.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and demonstrates a good command of language, especially in the context of the training course and its relevance to your role as a pharmacist. Terms like 'Total Parenteral Nutrition,' 'enteral nutrition,' and 'facilitate the healing process' are used accurately. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider varying the vocabulary by using synonyms or more nuanced expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures. While the grammar is generally accurate, there are a few areas where improvements can be made to enhance clarity and precision. For example, check for subject-verb agreement and correct any instances of incorrect tense usage. Pay close attention to punctuation, especially commas and apostrophes, to ensure they are used correctly throughout the letter.

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