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Band 9: You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter • remind your employer what the course was about • explain why the course was useful to you in your work • suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other Colleagues

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Dear Jane

I am writing to provide my feedback on the recent training course I attended, titled “Effective Communication and Team Collaboration in the Workplace.”

The course focused on enhancing interpersonal communication, active listening, and strategies for fostering better teamwork within professional environments. It also included practical exercises on conflict resolution and collaborative problem-solving.

I found the course to be extremely beneficial for my role, as it has helped me improve how I communicate with both colleagues and clients. I’ve already applied several techniques from the training, which have contributed to more productive meetings and smoother coordination within my team.

However, I believe the course may not be equally suitable for all of our colleagues. For those whose roles are primarily technical and involve minimal interaction with others, the course content may not be directly relevant to their daily responsibilities. In such cases, a more specialized training focused on technical skill development might be more appropriate.

Thank you again for the opportunity to attend the course.

Best regards,

Mahliyo

Manager

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9

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