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Band 9: You recently borrowed a valuable item from a friend, and unfortunately, it was damaged while in your possession. Write a letter to your friend explaining the situation. You should include details about: - describing how the damage occurred - expressing your regret and taking responsibility - suggesting a way to compensate for the damage.

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I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to sincerely apologise for the damage to your book “The Psychology of Success” that I borrowed last month. I feel truly awful about what happened and wanted to explain the situation honestly.

Last weekend, I was reading the book while having a cup of coffee, and unfortunately, I accidentally spilled some on the pages. Although I immediately tried to dry them, a few of the pages got stained and slightly wrinkled. I know how much you value your books, and I feel terrible for being so careless.

Please let me make it right. I’ve already checked several bookstores and found the same edition online. I would be more than happy to order a brand-new copy for you, or if you prefer, compensate you in another way. Just let me know what would make you feel comfortable – I truly want to fix my mistake.

Once again, I’m really sorry for the inconvenience. I appreciate your understanding and promise to be much more careful with anything I borrow from you in the future.

Warm regards,

Khojiakbar

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Overall Band Score

9

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

9

The letter fully satisfies the requirements of the task. It is well-written, clearly explains the situation, expresses sincere regret, and offers appropriate compensation. The tone is suitable, and the letter is organized logically.

Coherence & Cohesion

9

The letter demonstrates excellent coherence and cohesion. The message is easy to follow, with smooth transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is well-managed, contributing to the overall clarity of the letter.

Lexical Resource

9

The letter showcases a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The language is natural and sophisticated, enhancing the overall quality of the writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are used appropriately throughout, contributing to the letter's clarity and effectiveness.

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