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Band 6+: You recently moved to a new city and want to join a local gym. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter: introduce yourself and say why you want to join ask about membership options and fees inquire about facilities available at the gym

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to ask for information about membership in the gym. I have recently moved in the new city. I am Cassandra Baron living a flat near the gym. I want to improve my physical health so that I want to join the local gym.

I would like to know more about the facilities and membership options in the gym. If the facilities good I enjoy to join the gym. Because my previous gym had poor facilities so I didn’t go there anymore.

I am also interested to know about any classes or personal training sessions available. When noone disturb me during the training, I feel more comfortable.

I am expecting a comprehensive reply from your side about the details of the gym and other information I requested.You could send information to my email which is:cassandraboran@gmail.com.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully,

Cassandra Baron.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 4

information: 3

facilities: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, introducing yourself, explaining your reasons for joining, inquiring about membership options and facilities. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the letter is clear and fulfills the requirements of the task. To improve, focus on using more natural and varied language, and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping your requests more logically within paragraphs. For example, keep all membership-related questions together. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and varied word choices. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'gym' and 'facilities,' try synonyms or more descriptive terms. Also, be careful about word usage; for example, 'If the facilities good I enjoy to join the gym' is grammatically incorrect and lacks precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'I have recently moved in the new city' should be 'I have recently moved to the new city.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and avoid run-on sentences.

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