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Band 4+: you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try get a job. you think he/she should get a job

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Hi Sara,

I hope, you enjoy your school break.I understand though that choosing weather to continue higer education or apply job is a change decision.

Personality,I think I better for you to look a job.

Firstly, you can save a good amount of money by starting career earlier and then any your peers to continue in study at university.

Morever,some individuals have to make significiant of loans from banks because they do not have to all the mean to persuading education.with the saving you made, you can be more finanicially indepent and can even buy your own house at such an earlier age.Also you can still obtain knowledge and job techniques as well as interpersonal skills thoughtout real life experiences and comprehensive trainings provided by your employer.

I hope my recommendation will help you make own desicion.i hope in future your training experience will well.whatever path you choose I am sure that it will be the best solution for you.

Your best friend,

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by providing advice and reasons for getting a job instead of going to college. The arguments are relevant and generally well-explained. To improve, ensure that the advice is more directly tailored to the friend's specific situation or concerns, and that the language is consistently accurate and natural.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between points are not always smooth, making it slightly difficult for the reader to follow the advice being given. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to connect your ideas more logically. For example, using 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' can help build upon your initial point about saving money.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more varied and precise. There are instances where the word choice is not the most appropriate, affecting the clarity of the message. Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more accurately. For example, instead of 'look a job,' you could say 'seek employment' or 'find a job.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. For example, 'weather to continue higer education or apply job' should be 'whether to continue higher education or apply for a job.' Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction to enhance the accuracy of your writing.

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