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Band 8+: You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he /she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: - Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college. - Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. - Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her.

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Dear David,

Thanks for your letter. I’ve heard that you are still deciding whether to go to a college. I understand that finishing another program in school can be helpful for your immigration plan, but I would say that it may not be your best choice for now.

First of all, I think that continuing to study in college can be unenjoyable for you. You’ve just completed a demanding bachelor’s degree. I still remember how tired and overwhelmed you were during the final semester. Therefore, going to college means more assignments, difficult exams, and extra tuition fees which can be even more stressful.

In my opinion, starting to look for a job is the best option for you. Valuable work experience can make you more independent and mature. Also, salary can cover your basic living costs like rent and transportation fees, relieving your financial burden.

Speaking of job, I would recommend that you should search for positions like junior data analyst or data scientist since you are really talented at statistics and programming. These fields suit your background and personality well.

Please tell me your decision once you make the choice. I can’t wait to hear from you!

Best regards,

Jiayi

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Overall Band Score

8.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

college: 3

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Task Response

9

The letter fully satisfies the requirements of the task. It is well-organized, clearly explains why the friend might not enjoy college, provides strong reasons for getting a job, and suggests suitable job types. The tone is appropriate and friendly. Occasional omissions or lapses are acceptable at this level.

Coherence & Cohesion

8

The letter presents a clear and logical argument, making it easy to follow. The paragraphing is well-managed, and the transitions between ideas are generally smooth. To further enhance cohesion, consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

8

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, used appropriately to convey the message. The language is natural and effective. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary related to career advice and personal development.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

8

The letter exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures with excellent control. Grammar and punctuation are accurate throughout. There are only very minor errors.

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