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Band 6+: You recently stayed at a friend's house while they were away and accidentally broke a valuable vase. Write a letter to your friend, apologizing for the damage. You should include: - How the damage occurred - Why you feel so bad about the incident - What steps you will take to rectify the situation.

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Dear Simran ,

iI hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. I am doing great here, and I really appreciate your help in allowing me to stay at your home.

I am not quite sure how to start this, but the other day I was dusting the house and, unknowingly, I broke the vase by your front door. I know it was expensive and held great meaning for you. LI hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. I am doing great here, and I really appreciate your help in allowing me to stay at your home.

I am not quite sure how to start this, but the other day I was dusting the house and, unknowingly, I broke the vase by your front door. I know it was expensive and held great meaning for you.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

great: 4

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Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task by apologizing for breaking the vase and mentioning how it happened. However, it does not include what you have done or plan to do about it, nor does it fully express regret or offer compensation. To improve, ensure all bullet points are addressed with sufficient detail. Expand on your feelings about the incident and propose a solution to rectify the situation. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat repetitive. The second paragraph repeats the sentiments expressed in the first, which affects the flow and coherence. To improve, ensure each paragraph introduces new information or elaborates on a previous point without direct repetition.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied. While words like 'unknowingly' and phrases like 'held great meaning' are appropriate, incorporating a wider range of vocabulary could enhance the letter. Consider using synonyms or more descriptive language to express your regret and the vase's value. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally accurate with only minor errors. To enhance the grammatical range, try incorporating more complex sentence structures. For example, combine simple sentences or use subordinate clauses to add depth and sophistication to your writing.

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