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Band 7+: You recently visited a restaurant and had a disappointing experience with the quality of food and service. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant expressing your concerns and providing feedback about your experience. Include details about the date and time of your visit, the issues you encountered, and any suggestions you have for improvement.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to bring to your attention the unsatisfactory dining experience, that I encounter during my visit at your restaurant on the night of 3rd March.

I was looking forward to celebrate my wife birthday at your restaurant. Though, the reservation was made 1 week prior to the date, me and my partner had to wait for 40 mins to be seated. Upon inquiring about the delay staff was unable to provide a justification. Secondly, the food was served cold and it lacked the expected taste this affected our dining experience negatively. I would like to suggest few points that could help in improvise the service and enhance the dining experience. To begin with, staff should be trained and well informed about the issues happening at restaurant to provide good customer experience. Moreover, hiring more servers that will not only help to meet the increascing demand but also enhance the dining experience at your restaurant.

I trust that you will take my feedback into consideration and make the necessary improvements to maintain the reputation of your establishment.

Yours Sincerely,

Ram Kapoor

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Overall Band Score

7

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

experience: 5

dining: 4

restaurant: 3

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Task Response

7.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing concerns about the disappointing experience at the restaurant, providing details about the visit, issues encountered, and suggestions for improvement. To enhance the task response further, consider adding more specific examples of the issues faced and how they impacted the overall experience.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented logically. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the wait time and the quality of food. To improve coherence, consider using transitional phrases to connect ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

6.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter. However, some expressions could be more varied and sophisticated to enhance lexical resource. Additionally, pay attention to word choice and accuracy to further improve the lexical quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7.5

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used accurately. There are minor errors in punctuation and grammar, such as missing commas and inconsistent verb tenses. Proofreading for such errors can help improve the grammatical accuracy of the letter.

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