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Band 7+: You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Satinder,

I am very happy to see your performance today. I am writing this letter to give you feedback on your performance as it is fantastic and I enjoyed it.

It was an awesome experience for me to attend your concert as you are my favourite singer and yesterday was a red letter day for me because I saw your performance which is one of my dreams. Your melodious voice rejuvenates me and gives me so much energy that I forget all my worries. Moreover, I love music as I prefer to listen to music or sing a song in my free time. Furthermore, I love to participate in various music activities in which playing a guitar is at the top of my list.

I would be so much delighted if you would help me to learn how to play musical instruments like

Flute, and drums as you are a master in these things. I request you please find some spare time for me so I can able to learn musical activities.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely,

Love

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

performance: 3

music: 3

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Task Response

7.5

The letter effectively addresses all parts of the task by expressing feelings about the singer's performance, providing details of music-related activities, and explaining how the singer could help with music-related activities. To enhance task response, consider adding more specific details about the singer's performance that stood out to you.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically organized into paragraphs. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing music activities and requesting help with learning musical instruments. Try to improve the flow by connecting ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

6.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter, but some phrases could be more varied and sophisticated. Additionally, a few minor errors in word choice and collocations are present. To enhance lexical resource, aim for more diverse and precise vocabulary choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7.5

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used accurately. However, there are a few punctuation errors and minor grammatical mistakes that slightly affect the overall accuracy. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, pay closer attention to punctuation and grammar rules.

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