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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The image displays a line graph illustrating population changes from 1940 to 2000 in thousands for three Oregon counties: Columbia, Yamhill, and Washington. In 1940, Columbia had a population of 20, Yamhill had 30, and Washington had 75. By 1970, Columbia's population rose to 25, Yamhill's to 40, and Washington's to 120. In 2000, Columbia reached a population of 50, Yamhill 75, and Washington 240.

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The line graph illustrates the popuation in the state of oregon by three countries- the Columbia, Yamhill, and Washington- from 1940 to 2000.

Overall, all three nations have witnessed a continuous increase in population over the period, with Washington emerging as front-runner interms of population share, while Columbo and Yamhilll has demonstrated the sluggish and steady growth rate.

IN,1940 around 70 thousands population residing in Washington. Subsequently, it experienced a relentless and steady ascent and reached approximately 250 thousand population in 2000. Columbia, starting from a meager base of below 30 thousand population in 1940, has undergone a remarkable rise and reached a population just above 75 thousand in 2020.

Yamhill, commencing at a compareable level to malysia in 1940 with approximately population of 30 thousand. It showed an consistent substantial growth rate and peaked at 2000 with 90 thousands population.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the general trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the population figures for Washington and Columbia are misreported, and the final year is incorrectly stated as 2020 instead of 2000. Additionally, the report includes an irrelevant comparison to 'malysia' and contains numerous spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data, avoid irrelevant details, and proofread for language accuracy. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the organization of information within paragraphs could be improved. The overview is somewhat vague and does not clearly highlight the main trends. The paragraphs for each county are not clearly separated, and the flow is disrupted by abrupt transitions and unclear references (e.g., 'Columbo and Yamhilll' and 'malysia'). To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that comparisons between counties are explicitly stated and logically connected.

Lexical Resource

The report attempts to use a range of vocabulary (e.g., 'relentless and steady ascent', 'meager base', 'remarkable rise'), but there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'interms of', 'sluggish and steady growth rate', 'commencing at a compareable level to malysia'). The misuse of words and incorrect collocations reduce the clarity and naturalness of the language. To improve, focus on using precise and appropriate vocabulary, and avoid vague or incorrect terms. Also, ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly affect readability. Examples include subject-verb agreement errors ('has demonstrated' should be 'have demonstrated'), incorrect verb tense usage, missing articles, and incorrect prepositions. There are also sentence fragments and unclear structures. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures with accurate grammar, and proofread to correct basic errors. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and proper use of articles and prepositions.

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