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The image presents a table with data comparing modes of travel in England for the years 1985 and 2000. In 1985: Walking 255, Bicycle 51, Car 3,109, Local bus 429, Long distance bus 54, Train 289, Taxi 13, Other 450, Total 4,740. In 2000: Walking 237, Bicycle 41, Car 4,806, Local bus 274, Long distance bus 124, Train 366, Taxi 42, Other 585, Total 6,475.

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Changes in modes of travel changed in each year how we notice. This table contain all information thorough 1985-2000. The most changeable thing in this table is long distance bus. Maybe, this necessarily connects with its quality. Because, long distances buses make more differences that other transports. For example, this type of bus may bring more passengers and it is cheaper that other one. Another reason is it is really safer. However, this transport move not so fast, its speed is sustainable that others.

If we look tougher, the little differences in walking, moreover it increases from 255 to 237. By conciliating it make -18 points.

All this informations give for us that it all the end were 4,740 and for 2000 year it improved for 6,475. It is really satisfying thing. For instance, this shows that it develops for 1,735 points.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant and inaccurate information, detracting from the overall achievement. The analysis lacks specific data comparisons and focuses on speculative reasons for changes rather than describing the data itself. To improve, concentrate on accurately reporting the data from the table, making direct comparisons between the years, and avoiding personal opinions or speculations. Focus on summarizing the main trends and significant changes in the modes of travel. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The ideas are not well-organized, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The introduction is vague, and the body paragraphs jump between different modes of transport without a clear focus. The conclusion is also weak and doesn't effectively summarize the main points or provide a clear overview of the changes in travel modes. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on creating a clear structure with a well-defined introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Use topic sentences to introduce the main idea of each paragraph, and use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and sentences smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and there are several instances of inaccurate or inappropriate word choice ('changeable thing,' 'tougher,' 'conciliating'). The vocabulary used is not precise enough to effectively describe the data and make comparisons. To improve lexical resource, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends, changes, and comparisons. Use a dictionary and thesaurus to find more precise and appropriate words to express your ideas. Practice using new vocabulary in your writing to become more comfortable with it. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('modes of travel changed,' 'this table contain'), subject-verb agreement issues ('distances buses make'), incorrect preposition use ('in each year how we notice'), and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing and practicing basic grammar rules, including verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and preposition usage. Pay close attention to sentence structure and ensure that your sentences are clear and grammatically correct. Proofread your work carefully to identify and correct any errors.

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