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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the number of tourists visiting three different countries (France, Spain, and Italy) between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph showing the 'Number of tourists visiting three different countries (1995-2015)', with the vertical axis representing the Number of Tourists in millions. For France, the data points are: 1995, 58M; 2000, 65M; 2005, 75M; 2008, 83M; 2010, 88M; and 2015, 92M. For Spain, the figures are: 1995, 38M; 2000, 45M; 2005, 51M; 2008, 58M; 2010, 65M; and 2015, 85M. For Italy, the tourist numbers are: 1995, 25M; 2000, 30M; 2005, 38M; 2008, 45M; 2010, 53M; and 2015, 72M.

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The line graph illustrates how many visitors that holidayed in three distinct regions (France ,Spain and Italy) from 1995 to 2015.

Overall,France,Spain and Italy increased significantly over the period,with France being the most visited country and Spain being the least by 2015.

1n 1995,France was the most popular country for tourists vacations with 60million visitors,it remained dominant over time,rising to a 100million in 2010 and finally with the highest number of over 100million in 2015,similarly there was an upward trend with Spain being the second most visited region at almost 40million at the beginning increased by 60million people over time hereby maintaining its position as the second most popular country.

In contrast Italy had the least number of vacationers at 25million in 1995,however it gained twice the number in 2008 and saw a steady rise over the period ,peaking at approximately 70million,although it remained the lowest visited region over the decade,it saw a steady rise in number of individuals.

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes some comparisons, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported. For instance, the report mentions '100 million' visitors to France in 2010 and 2015, but the graph indicates 88 million and 92 million, respectively. Similarly, the report states Spain was the least visited by 2015, which is incorrect. To improve, ensure data accuracy by double-checking the graph and avoid exaggerations. Also, consider providing more specific details about the rates of increase or fluctuations in tourist numbers for each country to enhance the analysis.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the paragraphing and flow could be improved. The ideas are not always clearly linked, and the progression of information can be disjointed at times. For instance, the transition between discussing France and Spain in the third sentence of paragraph 2 feels abrupt. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the data and comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. While words like 'significantly,' 'dominant,' and 'steady rise' are used, incorporating a wider range of synonyms and more specific terminology related to tourism trends could enhance the report. For example, instead of 'increased significantly,' you could use 'experienced a substantial surge' or 'saw a marked increase.' Also, be careful with word choices like 'vacationers,' which is less formal.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Issues include incorrect punctuation (e.g., missing commas, incorrect use of 'that' instead of 'who'), subject-verb agreement problems, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'France was the most popular country for tourists vacations with 60million visitors' could be rephrased for better clarity and grammatical correctness. Focus on proofreading carefully to identify and correct these errors.

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