Bar Chart

Band 4+: You should spent 20 minutes on this task The chart below gives information about how people aged 25_35 are housed in UK Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main feature and make comparison where relevant At least 150 words

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: You should spent 20 minutes on this task The chart below gives information about how people aged 25_35 are housed in UK Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main feature and make comparison where relevant At least 150 words

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows a bar graph with the housing status percentages of people aged 25-34 in the UK from 2004 to 2014. For Home Owners: 2004: 59%, 2005: 58%, 2006: 56%, 2007: 54%, 2008: 53%, 2009: 51%, 2010: 43%, 2011: 40%, 2012: 39%, 2013: 37%, 2014: 36%. For Renters: 2004: 21%, 2005: 22%, 2006: 26%, 2007: 27%, 2008: 31%, 2009: 34%, 2010: 39%, 2011: 41%, 2012: 44%, 2013: 46%, 2014: 48%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Home Owners and Remters of people lived in UK aged 25 to 34 from 2004 to 2014.

Overall, it can be seen that the highest percentage of all housed residents in the first 9 years is Home Owners. While a significant decrease in the proportion of Home Owners and opposite in Renter over the period.

Since 2004, Home Owners account for the highest, nearly 60% and gradually decreased. From 2014, it is declined a half compared to the beginning. Whereas, Renters shown lowest number at the early stage, it only more than 20% but increase drastic during this time. At the end of the stage, it saw about 50%.

Word Count: 116

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

owners: 4

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the main trends of the chart, specifically the decline in home ownership and the rise in renting. However, the response is somewhat underdeveloped and lacks the depth required for a higher score. To improve, ensure that you include more specific data points (actual percentages) to support your descriptions and avoid vague phrasing like 'increase drastic' or 'it is declined a half'. Additionally, try to group data more effectively to make comparisons more sophisticated. The overview is present, which is good, but the body paragraphs would benefit from more precise mathematical comparisons and a clearer structure. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is somewhat disjointed. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are fragmented (e.g., the sentence starting with 'While a significant decrease...'). To improve, ensure that every sentence is a complete thought and use a wider variety of linking words such as 'In contrast,' 'Conversely,' or 'Subsequently' to connect your observations more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is functional but repetitive and contains several spelling and word-form errors (e.g., 'Remters', 'Renter', 'increase drastic'). There is an attempt to use comparative language, but it lacks precision. To reach a higher band, aim to use more varied synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' (e.g., 'plummeted', 'surged', 'experienced a downward trend') and ensure that adjectives and adverbs are used correctly (e.g., 'drastic increase' instead of 'increase drastic'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with verb tenses (e.g., 'it is declined', 'Renters shown'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. For example, 'it only more than 20%' lacks a verb. I recommend focusing on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly the use of the past simple tense for describing historical data, and ensuring that complex sentences are joined correctly using subordinating conjunctions.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

The graph below shows the number of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

The bar chart presents data on the number of three categories of visitors – adults, visitors aged under 15 and special exhibition visitors – who attended a museum over a 15-year period, spanning from 1997 to 2012. Overall, the majority of museum visitors were adults throughout the period, while special exhibition visitors represented a relatively […]

Band 8+

the chart below show the number of registered road vehicles in use in a European country in 1996 and 2006.

The chart compares the numbers of registered road vehicles including Lorries, Bus, Motorcycles, Private Cars and other types in use in a European Country between 1996 and 2006. In general, what stands out from the chart is that the quatity of road vehicles in 1996 were lower than that of in 2006. In addition, it […]

Band 4+

the chart below shows the avarage minutes per day that men and women spend on household activities.

The bar graph illustrates the average minutes per day that males and females spend on household activities. The X-axis shows different activities, namely preparing food, cleaning, laundry, garden care, and repair work. The Y-axis represents the time a person spends per day ranging from 0 to 40 minutes. The graph compares the data between men […]

Band 6+

The bar chart shows type of media to get daily news, by age group 2011.

The diagram displays type of media used to receive everyday updates, by different age sets in 2011. Overall, it is clear that young people mostly use social networking to receive news unlike the old generation which get news through listening radio. On the other hand, microblogging remained relevantly same in all age sets as it […]

Band 5+

The bar chart below shows a survey of young professionals aged 20-30 who were asked which factors motivated to succeed

The bar chart illustrates the results of a survey of young professionals aged 20 – 30, who were asked to state motivative factors to succeed. Overall, one of the most striking features is the personal satisfaction group, followed closely by the ambition group, while the fear of failure is the lowest group. Regarding the personal […]

Band 5+

The chart below shows library borrowing in UK public libraries during a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the number of books borrowed from public libraries in the UK across four categories, namely adult fiction, adult non-fiction, children’s books, and audio-visual materials between 1995 and 2005, measured in millions. Overall, children’s books showed the highest borrowing figures at the beginning of the period before decreasing sharply in the final […]

Band 8+

See All