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Band 4+: You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Greetings of the day.

I am writing to enquire informations about the gym membership. I am interested in joining to your gym, as I live in the neighbourhood.

I would like to know what types of membership are available in your gym and what are the prices for types of membership.

Also, I would like to know what are the activities available in the gym, I will appreciat it if you could share the schudle for each activity via email.

Finally, I would like to know what is the procedure to joinning to the gym.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

I would like to thank you in advance for any information.

with best regards,

Fatima dahmani.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear and concise request for information. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is generally well-organized, but some sentences are grammatically incorrect, making the flow slightly choppy.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate, but there are some instances of less precise word choices and minor errors in usage.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, particularly in verb tenses and prepositions, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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