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Band 5+: You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter • Give details of when you would like the car • Explain what type of car you would like • Request more information about the cost Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows, Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Sylvia Nemr.I am writing to you,as a client to your reputable agency, l always rent a car from you,and I would like to rent a car this week also as I have a holiday with my family.

The car will be needed during this week next Saturday, as I will go with my family to spend one week in a resort I prefer to receive it one day before so if it is available I can come on Friday at night.

It will be appreciated if you can help me to find a fast car with least price for a day Mercedes cars are preffered but if you have other options with same quality you can send to me. I also prefere it to be new model 2025 or 2024 not older than that.

Finally,l would like to ask you about the cost for one week. And what about if I want to use it for 2 days more than the week ?

Thank you in advance for your concern. I look forward to your answer about the prices and models that will be available at that time your help is appreciated.

Yours Sincerely,

Sylvia Nemr

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the request for information could be more precise and the overall structure could be improved for better clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the flow. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context. While there is a range of words, more precise and sophisticated language could be employed to elevate the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

There are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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