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Band 4+: Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to you friend. In your email: Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your friend could learn this sport Suggest that you learn this sport together.

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Dear Pican,

I hope you are doing wis. You asked me for advice about learnog a new sport, and I would like to recommend praying foosballe I thok football is a suitable spord for you because it is fun, healthy and you can have many friends. This sport αυτό helps increase fitness, speed and Skies pray.

Besides that, you can learn praying footban by janing a local sports center or praying footbar with friend’s every evening on the fearborn fields At the beginning, you con practice the basic skills such has how to kick the bas, foot movement and watch video footbau matches omine dise can help you improve you stirs faster.

Finary, I wowid sike to suggest that we learn this sport Logether. We can practic in the evening or weekend at nearby football field. Studying together will be more fun, give us this spirit of each other and can increase the Silence

I hope you like this proposes. I’t wait for a repy from you.

Yours Sincerely,

(Adrick Jamon)

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sport: 3

praying: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, recommending a sport, explaining how to learn it, and suggesting learning it together. There are some language errors throughout the letter, but the overall message is clear. To improve, focus on using more accurate vocabulary and grammar.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is generally clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between points sometimes feel abrupt. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat basic and contains inaccuracies ('praying foosballe,' 'Skies pray,' 'fearborn fields,' 'omine dise,' 'stirs,' 'Silence'). Expanding your range of vocabulary and ensuring accuracy would strengthen your writing. Focus on learning synonyms and collocations related to sports and leisure activities.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including incorrect verb forms ('learnog,' 'I thok,' 'This sport αυτό helps'), incorrect preposition use, and sentence structure issues. These errors impact clarity. Concentrate on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Review verb tenses, articles, and prepositions.

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