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Band 8+: Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/ She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, describe where you lived when you were a student at the university. Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation. Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation.

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Dear Jass,

I hope this email finds you in good spirits. Congratulations on securing a place at Delhi University! I’m honored that you seek my advice on finding accommodation during your course.

When I was a student at the University, I opted to rent a room in GTB Nagar, just outside the campus. The off-campus accommodation provided superior facilities compared to on-campus residences and offered a clean environment.

To find the best accommodation, I recommend reaching out to local real estate agents who specialize in assisting students. You can easily find their contact information online, and their expertise will greatly aid you in securing accommodation that suits your preferences.

One important tip is to consider renting a room with an air conditioner. Some students overlook this feature due to the additional cost, but in a city like Delhi, having an air conditioner can be essential, especially during the sweltering summer months.

If you need any more advice or help regarding your accommodation search, feel free to reach out to me.

Wishing you all the best with your studies at Delhi University.

Warm regards,

Param

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Overall Band Score

8

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

accommodation: 5

delhi: 3

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Task Response

7

The letter addresses the task appropriately by describing the writer's experience with accommodation at the university, recommending ways to find accommodation, and warning about common mistakes. To improve, provide more specific details about the off-campus accommodation and elaborate on the mistakes students make when choosing accommodation.

Coherence & Cohesion

8

The message is clear and easy to follow. The ideas are logically organized with a good use of paragraphing. To enhance coherence, consider using transition words or phrases to connect ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

8

A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately. However, to achieve a higher score, incorporate more sophisticated and varied vocabulary to enhance the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

8

There is a good range of grammatical structures used accurately. Minor improvements can be made in terms of punctuation and sentence structures for a more polished piece.

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