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Band 4+: Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes.

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Dear Sir/madam

I am writing this letter to inform you that the whole community is not happy with your decision to close the Sports and leisure centre for money crisis.

My name is Dhinil and living in this area for the last 10 year. Move over me and friend were also always utilize the centre for own fitness and overall health.

The main attraction of this villa is this sports and leisure centre, because the ambience and decoration inside was super amazing.

The local people will suffer to pay more amount in other centre. Then the members of the society is giving you a suggestion that is every persons are willing to pay a monthly fee for entry to the centre.

So I hope you take a good decision for this situation. I requesting to make it as soon as you can.

Yours Faithfully

Word Count: 144

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

centre: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by providing details of the writer's and friends' use of the center, explaining its importance, and describing potential effects of closure. However, the letter includes some irrelevant information (e.g., the ambience and decoration) and could benefit from more specific examples and a more organized structure. To improve, focus on providing concrete details and structuring your arguments more logically. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is weak, and the flow of ideas is not always logical. To improve coherence, use clear topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph to introduce the main point. Transition words and phrases can help connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs, making the letter easier to follow. For example, you could use 'Furthermore' to add another point or 'Therefore' to indicate a consequence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and lacks the range needed to express ideas effectively. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use synonyms and more specific words to convey your meaning. For instance, instead of 'super amazing,' you could use 'exceptionally well-maintained' or 'impressively designed.' Also, ensure that the words you choose are appropriate for a formal letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Focus on improving your sentence structure and verb tense accuracy. For example, 'Move over me and friend were also always utilize the centre' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It could be revised to 'My friends and I have regularly used the center.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct article usage (a, an, the), and proper punctuation.

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