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Band 5+: your local council is considering to close sports cenetre and leisure centre to save money. write a letter in which mention, ive details of how you nabd your friends use the centre, explain why leisure centre is important for local community people, describe the possible effects on local people if the centre close.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to draw your attention towards a major concern which is related to the only one sports and leisure centre that runs under your supervision. We got the news that you are planning to close the centre in order to save the funds.

This community centre is being used for more than a decade and people arrange their ceremonies and functions at relatively cheaper rent as compare to others. Moreover, some people also doing jobs in sports and leisure centre. If these centers close, employees would be jobless and you know it is quite difficult to find another job immediately.

Additionally, there are different nature of games are being conducted such as hockey, cricket and football. Furthermore, matches have been conducting in centre since many years and players of this game centre are recognized at national level because of their best coaching. Our best coach and trainer would also be jobless and passionate players would lose a beneficial platform.

Would you kindly reconsider your decision to not close the community hall and play centre? If you change your mind, everyone will be happy.

Looking forward to hearing your decision.

Regards,

Basit

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

centre: 6

close: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

6

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail in parts. More specific examples of community use and the impact of closure would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow could be smoother with improved paragraphing and transitions. The ideas presented are not always logically connected.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. More sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter is generally understandable, there are grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is essential.

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