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Band 5+: Crime In many countries, crimes rates amongst younger people has been rising.

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In recent decedes have seen juvinile criminals increase greatly in number all across the globe. There are two main reasons for this: lack of parental attention and poverty. However, solutions such as reduce working hours and increase salary can help adress these issues.

Firstly, parental attention poses a significant threat to the lives of young people. Many parents can not spend enough time with children or are not interested in their hometasks or what they are doing daily. Because the majority of people have to work. So they go to the work in the every morning. Consequently, their offspring feel neglected, affecting children’s behavior. As the result, children are likely to join a gang of criminals. This ultimately leads to committing serious crimes, such as theft, murder and others. To solve this, the government should reduce working hours or working days for families. If working hours are adjusted for parents, they would be able to return home earlier and have more time to devote to their children’s upbringing. It will have a positive impact on government development and the behavior of young people.

Secondly, nowadays the poverty rate is growing moderately. It can causes bad consequences. When some people can not afford their needs, they are forced to commit crimes. For instance, they can feed their family by stealing or work as an assasin. To counter this, the government should create more job opportunities and offer higher wages for the lower-class population. After which some poor people may no longer feel the need to crime. The number of crimes will gradually decrease, and people will adapt to avoiding criminal behavior.

In conclusion, in many countries, crimes rates amongst juviniles has been rising due to lack of parental attention and poverty. However, to reduce working hours and increase salary, then government can avoid a crime.

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