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Band 5+: In some countries teenagers have part-time jobs while they are still at school.

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In certain countries , teenagers take on part-time jobs while still attending school. I think having part-time job can offer benefits such as providing themselves’s needs and learn how to overcome life’s problems without helping from parents. But some time it can pose some threats like having not time to study and feeling depression or stress.

On the one hand, there are some positives to working part-time jobs while study at school . One merit is providing themselves’s needs. Since if they demand for something like clothes, books or notebooks and daily life needs, they can purchase it without financial help from parents. For example, my brother attend school and with that also work part-time job and he full cover himselves outputs. Another plus is learning how to overcome life problems. In this life , everyone faces to problems and throughout this challenging life people should overcome them. For this , everybody should experience and be sophisticated. For achieving this level people must begin from school years. Due to the fact that in school years they also take om their parential support and after the onwards they learn how to live.

On the other hand, despite the fact that having a part-time job brings advantages, there are also disadvantages . One drawback is the student who also works part-time job, they have not enough time to study. For the reason that , they attend school until afternoon, then go to the work untill the 8 or 9:00 p.m. After the hard and exhausted day they do not want to study and of course knowledge do not enter to their brain. A further setback is depression or be stress. In the whole day they tired of everything out of school and work with school homeworks . In this moment everyone feel depression and might be sick.

In conclusion, today it is commonplace to see school pupils working part time after school hours. I believe this can boring both merits and demerits to child.

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