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Band 5+: It is more important to spend public money on on promoting a health lifestyle in order to prevent illnesses than to spend it on the treatment of people who are ready ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experiences.

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In this day and age, people always discuss about medical treatment and disease prevention, which give rise to the opinion that the authorities should spend their expenditure on maintaining and promoting healthy lifestyle to avoid illnesses than use it to treat sick people. I agree that the government fund should be spent on cultivating healthy lifestyles, although I do also think that the money should be available for everyone, not only for those who are in good health.

On the one hand, when people usually get ill in the past, their body might not be as strong as before so keeping a healthy body and balanced lifestyle is crucial. There are some drelate to body organs such as heart, liver and kidney which can be cured by medicine but complications will last for a long time, maybe for entire life. As a result, having a healthy lifestyle will help to stay away from illnesses.

On the other hand, I also believe that sick people will be healthy again if they have a chance to be cured by the government spending. There are diseases that can be incurable which is believed that we do not need to waste money on that, but the patients should be given a try and with their strong mind somehow a miracle will appear.

In conclusion, keeping a healthy lifestyle is very important and everyone can use the money from the government because it can be used in different ways.

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