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Advantage And Disadvantage

Band 5+: Some experts believe that it is better if parents are given the right to know everything about their child. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In contemporary society, the majority of professionals consider that parents are giving right to be aware of all datas about their children. While this phenomenon leads advantages such as continious control in their academic life and protection of children from detrimental environment, it also can lead to the mistrusting problems and depriving social independance of them. From my perspective, the merits outweigh the drawbacks.

On the one hand, this situation causes many issues such as mistrust and deprive juvenile of social independence. First, in the period of scrutinization youngsters can get it as a pressing from their parents because they did not expect these kinds of circumstances from their previous times. After a while, continuous assessment cause severe mistrust feelings which is main physchological tool for them. Second, after first stage they understand that they are under pressure and it means that they cannot hide specific information from their parents. For example, recent research from the BBC news reveals that 60% of children who are come to psychologist suffer from parent’s pressings at home.

On the other hand, however this development leads severe psychological issues, it also provide significant development on youngsters’ upbringings. First, continuous assesment leads to building of severe mentality of children which will help them anywhere. For instance, it is obviously that student who is under parental pressure can easily differ from other with academical attainments or statistics because he or she is growing up under severe conditions which is itself benefical for children’s mentality. Moreover, these circumstances make easier manipulation of children background and their friends which is also facilitates protection of children. Overall these positive aspects completely outweigh disadvantgaes and secure juveniles under right conditions.

In conclusion, while this development causes disadvantages such as a lack of confidence and mistrusting issues, it also leads merits such as better academic life and protection them from severe environments which have negative impacts on their lives. Overall, in order to secure their future, the advantages entirely surpass disadvantages.

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