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Band 5+: Some people believe that children should be free to make mistakes without parental interference, while others think parents should prevent their children from making serious errors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In these days, the issue about children mistakes has argued. While some claim children should be make failures for no punishment, others state the parents should keep on eyes to their children not to make big mistakes. I support the idea that the children should be aparted far away from serious mistakes supported two reasons.

First of all, children cannot complete their responsiblities towards what they actually did. For instance, the badly crimes such as killing people. In developed countries, usually young criminals are protected by the law for children. They are allowed to get out jails easily even though they murdered. In contrast, when it comes to developing countries, they are treated as similary with adults and if the crime estimuted as the death penalty, they would be killed in young ages. Therefore, parents should watch out their son and daughter carefully to grow them up as polite citizens and not to end up youth lives.

In addition to that, there are also risks that are occured by young ages even though it was not stated as crimes, it is the accident. Some children do not know their behavior is not good. For example, in Japan, one child cut off the electoric cords in the store when his parents lost eyes on him. As a result, the all electrocities died in the store. After that, parents had to pay enormous money to the store so that parents should be together with children and teach them what is bad and not to pay waste money.

However, it is said that children grow slowly if the parents are always with them compared with children who are tought independent with the adults and some mistakes might be helpful to become adults faster than protected child. Having said that some errors enable to grow up efficiently, it is important to reduce their failures as possible as they can because it would promote children to grow up politly even if they spend more time than others.

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