🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Opinion

Band 6+: Some people prefer to study at university or college which leads to a successful career, others believe that people should get a job right after leaving school. What’s your opinion?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

There is a common belief that only by going to a college or university students can obtain a good job. It’s not wrong, however, not all students have enough conditions to attend higher education. Therefore, I suggest that getting a job right after graduating from high school is a better way for teenagers to gain success as there are numerous compelling reasons in my following essay.

First and foremost, I would shed light on the reasons why many keep studying to get an academic degree. This is crucial for those who have a dream of becoming an engineer, doctor, teacher, or a profuse of careers that are classified into high positions in society. To be in these driving seats, young individuals need to be equipped with knowledge and professional qualifications at the university level. Moreover, there are more priorities for school leavers who have a university degree in hand. A great number of companies, for example, recently required their employees to have qualifications acknowledged by a college or university to ensure the best work efficiency. On that account, it will be more competitive for graduates to successfully get a job that they have a burning desire for without university qualifications.

On the other hand, I would argue that it is far more beneficial for students to work without university qualifications. Getting a job after graduating high school is a sustainable and comfortable way for all students, especially for those who are unable to continue to study higher education. Not all people can make ends meet with the expensive fees in university or are interested in continuing their learning. Those who get a job after leaving high school have the opportunity to work and experience earlier than their friends in university. Then they are able to start up their own businesses with the practical and essential life skills that they attained from their work. Bill Gates, a compelling example, was known as a successful businessman without any degree from a higher education institution. On the contrary with many people that college is the only path to success, he dropped out of prestigious schools to start their own businesses and achieved great success.

In conclusion, from my perspective, in today’s world, it’s more vital for individuals to have a career that they can settle down rather than having an academic degree. However, studying higher education or going to work is also the ways that lead us to success. So, just need determination and passion, all ways will lead us to success.

Word Count: 419

Other Topics:

Many parents go to work in other countries and take family with them .Do advantages in this development outweigh the disadvantages.

In recent times, more and more parents prefer to get a job in other countries and take their family members with them. While this trend can entail some basic benefits, I wholeheartedly believe that drawbacks of it are much greater. To begin with positives, this trend can offer numerous advantages. The primary advantage is that […]

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people say that in the digital age, theatres and cinemas are no longer important as people can watch all the entertainment they want online. Others argue that theatres and cinemas are still important both economically and culturally. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

There is an ongoing debate regarding watching movies and fun activities. A group of individuals believes that in this digital world, big screens are not necessary because they can watch everything online. However, others argue that a large indoor room or hall where an audience gathers is still crucial for a country’s economic and cultural […]

It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Numerous individuals prefer buying expensive clothes instead of plenty cheaper dresses. This is because of the following reasons; Firstly, having quality clothes will last longer compared to having a bulk quantity of low quality dresses which is likely to get damaged within a short period of time. For instance,growing up my dad gave my elder […]

Fast food causes obesity and is harmful. What do you think?

The problem of obesity is rapidly increasing all over the world. Some people believe that it is a serious issue depending on consuming fast food. I partly agree it and I will evaluate it from both beneficial and harmful perspectives. Firstly, today, we see that many people prefer to eat fast food rather than choosing […]

Cooperation rather than competition should be encouraged among high school students. In about 200-250 words, write an essay to express your opinion on the proposal. Use reasons and examples to support your position.

The debate over whether people should compete against each other or try to cooperate is a contentious issue. Many individuals belive that competition in elsewhere has a significant outcome, while others argue that we should try to cooperate more. This essay will discuss both perspectives before concluding that one is ideal. On the one hand, […]

it is important for everyone , including young people,to save money for their future

Nowadays, inflation is the highest it has ever been, which has led to an increased number of people, young and old to save money that can be used in the future when the need arises. I completely agree with this statement, as the future is full of uncertainity, and to deal with such unforeseen circumstances; […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress & Analyze Mistakes By Question Type
Save Your Own Flashcard Sets & Use Them On Any Device
Unlock All Courses, IELTS Tests, Section & Part Practice
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools & AI Features
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.