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Band 5+: Some people think governments should lower the budget on arts in order to allocate more money to education. However, others think investing in arts is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The question, whether the government should spend more money to foster education system or to develop arts has long been a topic of debate, eliciting divergent opinions. While proponents tend to think that investing budget for children’s studies assistances with attending foreign students, opponents emphasize value of artistic endeavours is more crucial in the sense of visiting more tourists in local museums. In my view, these two factors are prerequisites to boost economical circumstance, thus should be seen as complementing each other.

There are some sound reasons behind some individuals’ belief in relation to boost education yields. Firstly, focusing on schooling system might help to produce personnels who are able to solve or minimize some global issues by thinking outside the box. As a result of this phenomenon, certain government can create competitive atmosphere among youngsters, attracting students from overseas and achieving a plethora of a talented school students. In other words, having many knowledgeable people serves as a catalyst for economic growth, incorporating make a companionship with other developed countries. Put simply, in South Korea, the government relies on universities where thousands of useful creations are produced every year by students. By selling such products, country can generate enough income. Thus, by noticing educational frameworks, any country can witness a growth.

Nevertheless, investing on arts may also serves as a means of developing economy, with alluring more tourists to show traditions or cultures. After visiting of a lot of tourists the government can create many workspaces for dwellers such as guiding foreigners or cleaning common places. In addition, there are numerous amateurs who want to be famous painter in the future. Considering the fact that artistic field does not require expensive equipment, budget of country can be saved in some ways. Many countries such as Japan, Germany or Uzbekistan to name but a few can be perfect examples in this case where almost 50% of residents earn money by selling their paints which are ubiquitous throughout these countries. Therefore, artistic field can also act as a pivotal source of boosting economical circumstance.

In conclusion, I believe that for countries to go from strength to strength, the government should not only invest learning framework but also signal on arts, knowing both of these approaches can be beneficial.

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