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Band 7+: some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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According to recent research, many people suggest that having competitions at work, school, or in daily life can improve their minds and help them work harder. However, others claim that focusing on cooperation would be an ideal way to go due to high levels of motivation. In my opinion, while competition can yield significant outcomes, it’s better to collaborate with others.

On one hand, today the majority of people experience competition in various aspects of their lives. Competitions can lead individuals to enhance their capabilities and work harder because the competitive spirit motivates everyone to strive for excellence and gain new experiences. For example, after graduating from school, students enter university where they will compete against each other.

On the other hand, fostering a collaborative environment is more valuable. When people work with smarter partners, they can identify their mistakes more easily and correct them, which provides them with the motivation to work harder and reach a higher level of performance. For instance, a sophomore student can assist a freshman student in creating a presentation or sharing ideas, resulting in the freshman student being motivated and supported to work harder.

In conclusion, while living in a competitive environment can encourage some individuals to work harder due to the competitive spirit and achieve their goals, collaboration plays a fundamental role in human development. This is because the high levels of motivation, feedback, and advice provided by smarter individuals contribute significantly to personal growth and success.

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