In this modern era, most people think that the type of education like school are very competitive and has a detrimental effect. While, some people think that competitive circle forces students to achieve. Inevitably, I strongly believe that competitive surroundings it is very important for children to gain their dream or accomplishment.
Right off the bat, recently most people have a throught that school are too competitive and has disadvatage. Firstly, in the school there is annual examination to pass their grade. For instance, in Indonesia there is national examination known as “UN” from junior high school to senior high school, the student have to pass the examination for entering the best school in their environment, if they can not get the highest score it is tough to go to good school. Secondly, they score will be published in the school and all people can see their score and for some students of course it is a shame. However, when they can not enter to their dream school they will deppresed.
Other than that, has a competitive environment can encourage the student to achive their dream, it will motivate them to study hard, so they more take care about their forseeable future and think about what must they do to gain their dream. To illustrate, my cousin has a friend who is always gain medal for the competion, so it makes my cousin excited to ask about how her friend strategy to study until gain medal.
To sum up, most people think school are too competitive since they need to gain their dream school, they must to compete with others and their school will be shared their score which is make them deppresed. Nevertheless, competitive circle can force them to gain their own accomplishment and nothing easy in this word, they need to study hard to achive they dream and make it comes true.