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Band 7+: Some people think that the success of life is based on hard work and determination. Others, however, believe that there are more important factors, such as having money or a good appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Success is something that most people desire daily, but not all of them can really reach the top, due to different crucial reasons. Some assume that to succeed in a particular area, the person should work hard and put in so much effort. While others believe that factors such as having money or a good appearance, appear to be predominant, Personally, I am inclined to agree with the first point of view and want to elaborate on some significant reasons for both sides.

To begin with, there are individuals who believe that perseverance and determination are the keys to success, and this position is definitely understandable for me, since some significant reasons exist to prove its rightness. The main one is that the impact of hard work will not suddenly disappear, inasmuch as it is something for which a person spends a lot of energy; so many attempts are taken on the way to triumph, and a lot of work has been done. It is common to say that appearance is only the first impression, but potential and experience are what make the main part of this impression. Furthermore, money certainly is the base of all spheres of a human’s existence, but to develop something, a person needs to have knowledge about their sphere of competence and awareness about the actions that are taken.

On the other hand, finances, as I mentioned before, are one of the keys to building the foundation of a business, for instance, and without them, all other factors make almost no sense. There are so many examples of people who might build a great company; nevertheless, the lack of money destroys the future of those individuals. Besides, appealing look, as well as money might play a significant role in success. Alas, nowadays, image is the first thing that anyone notices, and it can make either a good or bad impression on future investors, partners, or people who might help with something. ‘There exist some situations where the career of someone is built on their charming features, and nobody can prevent such circumstances from happening.

To conclude everything said above, all the efforts and persistence on something obviously lead to success, but in the present times, those who presume that cash and charms might work better might be as well right in such a matter.

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