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Band 4+: Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for violent crimes among young people is that they are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Based on the statement from the paragraph above, I would like to say that I strongly disagree with the opinion. From my point of view, the basic reason will be rooted in each individual themselves, to be precise, it is their genetics. Some people are born with a tendency to do something impulsively and act more emotionally. Thus, the unique characteristics of each human cannot become the main reason as the cause of an action.

Although I must agree that there will be more reasons that will support the violent crimes from happening. Parents and teachers are one of the biggest reasons, but still, they aren’t the basic reason. Young people usually tend to idolize someone as a role model and will mimic something that is more likely to occur in their environment or on their daily basis.

Parenting technique also differs from each family. Some parents just have a bad and toxic habit that is so problematic and impacts the development of their child. Some of them even have a criminal record. Therefore, the good parents figure or role model has already been gone for their kids.

Not tothe mention their teachers. For some teachers, it is a very difficult thing to do when you have a lot of individual students who need your attention. Each student needs a different approach due to their unique background. Somehow, they “miss” to do the right emotional support to each of their students.

Last but not least. There are still many reasons that need to be considered for a young person to commit a crime, such as their circle of friends, their social interaction with another person inside their neighbourhood, and even things that are viral or common in their age, especially from the internet.

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