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Band 4+: Today more people put their private information (address, telephone and plastic card numbers) online to do their daily activities (banking, shopping, socializing). Is it a positive or negative development?

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It is an irrefutable fact that the technological devlopment have changed behaviours and documentation storage in their daily life. Altough sharing personal information of people in online platforms of the government good for auditing and precise documentation, I believe that this trend is a negative devlopment.

To begin with, digitalization is an integral part of our modern society, in turn these means people should share some part of their private information in government or public companies. It is clear that, putting personnel information in online platforms can be easy for state to analyise their citizens datas or company to aware of their custumers behavior. For example, the government of Azerbaijan applied intensive digitalization over last decade in order to know possible change of people in big cities. This implementation contributed improvement of overall well-being of people. In addition, sharing document in platforms can be easy for your company to analyse their client preferences.

Despite all above advantages mentioned, the internet world is changing so fast than we expected and sharing privacy files in platforms doesn’t mean it is in safe place. It is obvious that, bank or life insurance companies always require valuable and critic personal information due to custumer policy, taking those vital datas from those data base is not inaccessable for hackers. For example, the hacker group from North Korea could take all importance files from life insurance company in Azerbaijan between 2017 and 2019, which damaged confidence of people to that type of platforms. Futhermore, companies can collect information of their custumers not for only sales purposes, political impacts.

In conclusion, although storaging or sharing personal information with bank, insurance and other companes gives opportunity for companies to analyise or aware their clients, I tend to beliebe that cyber attack is a main risk for ordinary people.

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