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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
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15 comments on “It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?”
Now a days, it is important the children to learn difference between right and wrong at the early age. Little bit punishment in necessary to help them learn this distinction. Moreover, I believe that children should learn the difference what is right and what is wrong otherwise punish them. This punishment either be a verbally or physically and betterment of the children.
Firstly, In early age children should be learn the difference between right and wrong because it very important for living a good life. If a parents teach their children but they do not follow instruction, than they punished by verbally for betterment. Therefore, Some parents physically punish their children its good but in limits. If parents give punishment hard, this thing will lead toward stubbornness and aggressive. I am not in the favor of this type of punishment. For example, According to the Harvard university research held in 2019, children spend more time on phone. When parents says with normal behavior do not use phone they irritate. When children denial behavior than parents got frustrated. Sometime, some parents punish physically for the betterment of children.
Secondly, in this advance or materialist world social media is controlling our behavior. Children prefer to learn from social media. We all are going towards the isolation. Our first priority should teach our children about what is evil and what is deeds. If children are able to differentiate between right and wrong, it means you have pay your role. Moreover, sometime we teach our children with love and sometime with little bit strictness. It should in a limit because Gen Z generation is unstoppable. We should all have moral values for life. If we spend our life according to rules and regulation than children will adopt itself. For instance, A research held that children learn from copying, if you want your children do book reading than you do booo reading intron of children. After sometime they will do, when they will see you are doing book reading.
In sum up, it is very important to teach children what is wrong and what is right in the early age because till the young age they will be habitual to identify bad and good. They will be more confident and they will capable to face challenging situation. On the other hand, parents and teachers can give punishment like, by scolding, with little bit aggressive behavior, not more than that. That punishment should be give to realize them they do wrong. These type of punishment is acceptable for the good behavior.
I agree with the statement to show the children from the early age between difference that is right or wrong. For example parents should tell the children that is wrong to hurt animals. Because they are vulnerable and helpless. But only on words without punishment because it can cause of trauma to the young and undeveloped kids’ brain. Instead of physical punishment parents and teachers can show the children the right behaviour in theirs own example
There is a trend for vast majority of people to hold opinion that nowadays young generation must face the sanctions because of their actions. I partly agree with this way of education, because younger should clearly understand wrongs and rights at an early age and older can easily show them good manners by their own example, meanwhile use only non-physical punishment for it, otherwise can only cultivate anger.
First of all, I believe that it is very important for young children to know what is acceptable and unacceptable behaviour. Moreover, if they learn these rules early, they are more likely to grow into respectful adults in the future. For example, according to a 2020 study by Harvard University, children who experience fair but firm non-physical punishment, such as losing screen time or favourite activities, tend to develop a stronger sense of responsibility and self-control, than those who are shouted of physical punishment.
Secondly, it is important to understand that stress because of harsh and cruel punishment often harm more than give right experience. Also physical punishment damage the idea of great behaviour and kids confident, lead to fear and aggressiveness in the future. Thus, adults should show a good example by using their own classes and focus on positive discipline methods, such as explaining why the behaviour is wrong and setting reasonable consequences. For instance, time-outs, removal of some privileges at school and at home can be effective ways to correct kids mind and save their mental health.
In conclusion, I partly agree that it is important to use punishment in kids education in the 21 century, because gentle teaching can help children learn what is acceptable and what is not without involving physical damage.
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Now a days, it is important the children to learn difference between right and wrong at the early age. Little bit punishment in necessary to help them learn this distinction. Moreover, I believe that children should learn the difference what is right and what is wrong otherwise punish them. This punishment either be a verbally or physically and betterment of the children.
Firstly, In early age children should be learn the difference between right and wrong because it very important for living a good life. If a parents teach their children but they do not follow instruction, than they punished by verbally for betterment. Therefore, Some parents physically punish their children its good but in limits. If parents give punishment hard, this thing will lead toward stubbornness and aggressive. I am not in the favor of this type of punishment. For example, According to the Harvard university research held in 2019, children spend more time on phone. When parents says with normal behavior do not use phone they irritate. When children denial behavior than parents got frustrated. Sometime, some parents punish physically for the betterment of children.
Secondly, in this advance or materialist world social media is controlling our behavior. Children prefer to learn from social media. We all are going towards the isolation. Our first priority should teach our children about what is evil and what is deeds. If children are able to differentiate between right and wrong, it means you have pay your role. Moreover, sometime we teach our children with love and sometime with little bit strictness. It should in a limit because Gen Z generation is unstoppable. We should all have moral values for life. If we spend our life according to rules and regulation than children will adopt itself. For instance, A research held that children learn from copying, if you want your children do book reading than you do booo reading intron of children. After sometime they will do, when they will see you are doing book reading.
In sum up, it is very important to teach children what is wrong and what is right in the early age because till the young age they will be habitual to identify bad and good. They will be more confident and they will capable to face challenging situation. On the other hand, parents and teachers can give punishment like, by scolding, with little bit aggressive behavior, not more than that. That punishment should be give to realize them they do wrong. These type of punishment is acceptable for the good behavior.
I agree with the statement to show the children from the early age between difference that is right or wrong. For example parents should tell the children that is wrong to hurt animals. Because they are vulnerable and helpless. But only on words without punishment because it can cause of trauma to the young and undeveloped kids’ brain. Instead of physical punishment parents and teachers can show the children the right behaviour in theirs own example
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There is a trend for vast majority of people to hold opinion that nowadays young generation must face the sanctions because of their actions. I partly agree with this way of education, because younger should clearly understand wrongs and rights at an early age and older can easily show them good manners by their own example, meanwhile use only non-physical punishment for it, otherwise can only cultivate anger.
First of all, I believe that it is very important for young children to know what is acceptable and unacceptable behaviour. Moreover, if they learn these rules early, they are more likely to grow into respectful adults in the future. For example, according to a 2020 study by Harvard University, children who experience fair but firm non-physical punishment, such as losing screen time or favourite activities, tend to develop a stronger sense of responsibility and self-control, than those who are shouted of physical punishment.
Secondly, it is important to understand that stress because of harsh and cruel punishment often harm more than give right experience. Also physical punishment damage the idea of great behaviour and kids confident, lead to fear and aggressiveness in the future. Thus, adults should show a good example by using their own classes and focus on positive discipline methods, such as explaining why the behaviour is wrong and setting reasonable consequences. For instance, time-outs, removal of some privileges at school and at home can be effective ways to correct kids mind and save their mental health.
In conclusion, I partly agree that it is important to use punishment in kids education in the 21 century, because gentle teaching can help children learn what is acceptable and what is not without involving physical damage.
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it is argued that children should be able to differentiate what is right and what is wrong at young age. They can be taught this by punishing them.
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