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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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It is argued that some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Meanwhile, others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations because a man could deserve better for himself. However, i believe that it is better to try and improve such situations because if you are capable you deserve it.
Firstly, the supports are argue that it is best to accept a bad situation such as and unsatisfactory job or shortage of money because where a man doing a job he should compromise there. No matter what happened in your surroundings just do your own work because ups and downs comes in your professional life. A man is successful who maintain in this type of situation. For example, if a company facing a uncertain situation you are stand with that than the company will with you when you will face crucial situation. While on the other hand, those supporter argued that it is better to try and improve such situations more forward toward your goals. Those people do not give up in their life no matter what will be circumstances, they always do their work they have clear goals to achieve. For instance, Jeff bizoz a world famous entrepreneur he several times fall in his life but he decided to tackle difficult situations at the end now, he is a successful businessman in entire world. He is owner of apple mobiles and laptop. Its biggest company turnover company the whole world.
Finally, some people to live in bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, but my opinion always move and looks forward for the better option. We should accept reality and take hard decision for making better life better. If a man live better life, make yourself capable and talented.
Even though some people believe that to accept bad situation and unsatisfactory job or shortage of money is best, it is best for those people who need time to think what they actually want because we stay and enjoy only that time when we feel that we already achieve that thing which we actually want but if we could not achieve that destination still sometime we need time to think that is it the wright way to our destination or not but it does not mean we stay in that situation forever. we need to get enough courage to again standup and keep trying to achieve your goals. Sometime we have to take stand for ourselves, so choose the wright path and keep trying until you succeed.
Life has always been a perfect blend of satisfactions and dissatisfactions which helps a person to grow. On one hand, there are many people who accepts the reality and the failure they come across which could be realted to their jobs or financial conditions. On the other hand, people who have the never giving up attitude can be observed, who will keep hustling till they upgrade their life style. Whereas both the approches are plausible but I agree with the later view.
Turning wheels into motion, worlds become easier place for people who starts accepting the reality. As the society is comeptitive enough, rejections has been part of everyone’s life at some point. People who are not delusional and have reality checks can take pragmatic decisions and does not end into larger issues such as bank corruptcy, or loan failure. Such people just explore within whatever options they have to make money.
On the contrary, some people live by their goals as it keeps them motivated and encouraged. Many successful people can be used as an example who have never given up, after failing numbers of time. For instance, Thomas Edison have tried multiple materials to make filament of a buld but he failed more than 100 times but at the end he gave a master piece to the world. When a person keeps trying and concentrates on sharpeing their skills no matter what the situation is, universe does somehow pays backs.
To sum up, both the ideas of accepting reality and keep trying has its own significance but I believe in order to be succesful financially one must keep trying, and push their limit until they reach their threshold.
While other people argue that accepting a bad situation, such as unsatisfatory job or shortage of money,some argue that improving such situations is better.iam of the opinion that it is better to improve the situatin rather than accepting it.this essay will discus both opinions of improving the situation and accepting the situation
Firstly,accepting a bad situation and agreeing to remain in a status quo can realy impact your life negatively.For example if you are in a job you are not happy with,you tend to stagnate pfofessionally and also get affected mentally since the work place is not comfortable.moreover,the efficiency in you work will be reducing because of unhealthy working environment.In modern life,people are aware of their rights and can really make decision on how to deal with different life situations.
Additionally,improving your situations will add more value to your life since it will impact you life positively.For instance with improved situations,one can meet his needs and this attributes greatly to a healthy lifestyle which will finally translate to happy life which everyone needs.
To conclude,improving your situatios is greatly adviced .Everyone works hard to have a healthy lifesyle which is greatly contributed by improved life situation.
On the one hand, it is the right choice when a person does not argue with the faith and tend to live in agreement with all sides of being. Despite hard challenges, one have to continue existing according the resources which were given before. Moreover, such a difficult own way not only improves one’s special characteristics, but makes their owner more resilient as well.
I think the best thing you can hold on to in life is goals. They make you work harder, feel proud once you have accomplished them and they take you on a journey of self reflection and make you grow as a person. During that path of doing everything you posibly can to reach your goals you are going to come accross some obsacles. If you give up at the first inconvenience you are never going to reach your full potential. I believe that in some situations you indeed have to work through difficult situations to overcome them and you will eventially grow and learn from them. But i also agree with the other argument that sometimes you have to let go of those inconveniences and accept them. Sometimes people value their work or academic success way too much. They think it is the only fullfilment in life. Some of these people often forget their loved ones, miss out on life and forget to make time for anything other than work. From that point of view i prefer someone who didn’t succeed in their work life but feels fufilled by what they have gone through and lived rather than someone who thinks they are the smartest and the best because of work but haven’t experienced anything.
Bad situations can happen lots of times in the course of living. While some people think you have to let go of them and move on without necesseraly trying to fix them is the solution to getting through it. Others will think that it is best to try and overcome those situations by working towards a better outcome. Those situations might be not enjoying your work place, not having enough money to sustain your everyday lifestyle… Today we will be discussing wich of these options is best in life
In this modern life, there are two common opinions is that we can be satisfied with the unstable situation or we need to try our best to improve these circumstances. In my perspective, both choices have its own benefits and disadvantages. Firstly, accepting the fate gives us the time enjoy our life instead of too focusing to the very ending target. The beneficial impact is that we will have a better mental health and also the stronger physical health. However, the disadvantages might cause is that all of the existing issues could not be solved, for example accepting to stay in the toxic working environment or relationship, it can make us feel safe and stable at the beginning but after a long time, when our mental can not take it anymore, we totally break down and will be led to the bad decision such as suicide or self-harm. On the other hand, always working hard to change the bad situation might be better because we can solve the problem very early, when these situations have not been in the worst stage. Moreover, the problem solving oriented behavior can help us have the very active mind, the brain work usually can be more productive and give us many experiences to make the right decision in the future. Even though, these mindset still has some of the bad effect such as we will feel stressful more frequently, and spending too much time on working can reduce our time spending on family and friend. Therefore, it might make us lost the connection with the relation network and also lost the connection with your-self. In summary, it is obvious that everyone have a choice follow their requirement and expectation, nobody can make a decision on behalf of others. In my opinion, I would like to choose the best way to balance both of the way of action depends on each situation in my life.
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It is argued that some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Meanwhile, others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations because a man could deserve better for himself. However, i believe that it is better to try and improve such situations because if you are capable you deserve it.
Firstly, the supports are argue that it is best to accept a bad situation such as and unsatisfactory job or shortage of money because where a man doing a job he should compromise there. No matter what happened in your surroundings just do your own work because ups and downs comes in your professional life. A man is successful who maintain in this type of situation. For example, if a company facing a uncertain situation you are stand with that than the company will with you when you will face crucial situation. While on the other hand, those supporter argued that it is better to try and improve such situations more forward toward your goals. Those people do not give up in their life no matter what will be circumstances, they always do their work they have clear goals to achieve. For instance, Jeff bizoz a world famous entrepreneur he several times fall in his life but he decided to tackle difficult situations at the end now, he is a successful businessman in entire world. He is owner of apple mobiles and laptop. Its biggest company turnover company the whole world.
Finally, some people to live in bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, but my opinion always move and looks forward for the better option. We should accept reality and take hard decision for making better life better. If a man live better life, make yourself capable and talented.
Even though some people believe that to accept bad situation and unsatisfactory job or shortage of money is best, it is best for those people who need time to think what they actually want because we stay and enjoy only that time when we feel that we already achieve that thing which we actually want but if we could not achieve that destination still sometime we need time to think that is it the wright way to our destination or not but it does not mean we stay in that situation forever. we need to get enough courage to again standup and keep trying to achieve your goals. Sometime we have to take stand for ourselves, so choose the wright path and keep trying until you succeed.
Life has always been a perfect blend of satisfactions and dissatisfactions which helps a person to grow. On one hand, there are many people who accepts the reality and the failure they come across which could be realted to their jobs or financial conditions. On the other hand, people who have the never giving up attitude can be observed, who will keep hustling till they upgrade their life style. Whereas both the approches are plausible but I agree with the later view.
Turning wheels into motion, worlds become easier place for people who starts accepting the reality. As the society is comeptitive enough, rejections has been part of everyone’s life at some point. People who are not delusional and have reality checks can take pragmatic decisions and does not end into larger issues such as bank corruptcy, or loan failure. Such people just explore within whatever options they have to make money.
On the contrary, some people live by their goals as it keeps them motivated and encouraged. Many successful people can be used as an example who have never given up, after failing numbers of time. For instance, Thomas Edison have tried multiple materials to make filament of a buld but he failed more than 100 times but at the end he gave a master piece to the world. When a person keeps trying and concentrates on sharpeing their skills no matter what the situation is, universe does somehow pays backs.
To sum up, both the ideas of accepting reality and keep trying has its own significance but I believe in order to be succesful financially one must keep trying, and push their limit until they reach their threshold.
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While other people argue that accepting a bad situation, such as unsatisfatory job or shortage of money,some argue that improving such situations is better.iam of the opinion that it is better to improve the situatin rather than accepting it.this essay will discus both opinions of improving the situation and accepting the situation
Firstly,accepting a bad situation and agreeing to remain in a status quo can realy impact your life negatively.For example if you are in a job you are not happy with,you tend to stagnate pfofessionally and also get affected mentally since the work place is not comfortable.moreover,the efficiency in you work will be reducing because of unhealthy working environment.In modern life,people are aware of their rights and can really make decision on how to deal with different life situations.
Additionally,improving your situations will add more value to your life since it will impact you life positively.For instance with improved situations,one can meet his needs and this attributes greatly to a healthy lifestyle which will finally translate to happy life which everyone needs.
To conclude,improving your situatios is greatly adviced .Everyone works hard to have a healthy lifesyle which is greatly contributed by improved life situation.
On the one hand, it is the right choice when a person does not argue with the faith and tend to live in agreement with all sides of being. Despite hard challenges, one have to continue existing according the resources which were given before. Moreover, such a difficult own way not only improves one’s special characteristics, but makes their owner more resilient as well.
I think the best thing you can hold on to in life is goals. They make you work harder, feel proud once you have accomplished them and they take you on a journey of self reflection and make you grow as a person. During that path of doing everything you posibly can to reach your goals you are going to come accross some obsacles. If you give up at the first inconvenience you are never going to reach your full potential. I believe that in some situations you indeed have to work through difficult situations to overcome them and you will eventially grow and learn from them. But i also agree with the other argument that sometimes you have to let go of those inconveniences and accept them. Sometimes people value their work or academic success way too much. They think it is the only fullfilment in life. Some of these people often forget their loved ones, miss out on life and forget to make time for anything other than work. From that point of view i prefer someone who didn’t succeed in their work life but feels fufilled by what they have gone through and lived rather than someone who thinks they are the smartest and the best because of work but haven’t experienced anything.
Bad situations can happen lots of times in the course of living. While some people think you have to let go of them and move on without necesseraly trying to fix them is the solution to getting through it. Others will think that it is best to try and overcome those situations by working towards a better outcome. Those situations might be not enjoying your work place, not having enough money to sustain your everyday lifestyle… Today we will be discussing wich of these options is best in life
In this modern life, there are two common opinions is that we can be satisfied with the unstable situation or we need to try our best to improve these circumstances. In my perspective, both choices have its own benefits and disadvantages. Firstly, accepting the fate gives us the time enjoy our life instead of too focusing to the very ending target. The beneficial impact is that we will have a better mental health and also the stronger physical health. However, the disadvantages might cause is that all of the existing issues could not be solved, for example accepting to stay in the toxic working environment or relationship, it can make us feel safe and stable at the beginning but after a long time, when our mental can not take it anymore, we totally break down and will be led to the bad decision such as suicide or self-harm. On the other hand, always working hard to change the bad situation might be better because we can solve the problem very early, when these situations have not been in the worst stage. Moreover, the problem solving oriented behavior can help us have the very active mind, the brain work usually can be more productive and give us many experiences to make the right decision in the future. Even though, these mindset still has some of the bad effect such as we will feel stressful more frequently, and spending too much time on working can reduce our time spending on family and friend. Therefore, it might make us lost the connection with the relation network and also lost the connection with your-self. In summary, it is obvious that everyone have a choice follow their requirement and expectation, nobody can make a decision on behalf of others. In my opinion, I would like to choose the best way to balance both of the way of action depends on each situation in my life.
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