Band 6: Describe something you want to replace (User-Submitted IELTS Speaking Answer)

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When it comes to something I want to replace, the first thing that comes to mind is my laptop. I've had it for three years, a gift from my mom for my 14th birthday in ninth grade. Since then, I've used it for everything – studying, entertainment like watching movies, listening to music, and playing games. But lately, it's showing signs of being outdated. First, it constantly glitches and takes forever to boot up. Second, it has storage problems. It only has 74 GB, and the system takes up half of that. This means I can't download applications like Photoshop to learn new skills or store more documents. I'd love to have a laptop with more storage. Third, the battery is a problem. It drains quickly and shows signs of being worn out.

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When it comes to something that I want to replace, then the first thing that comes to my mind is my laptop. I have owned it for three years in which my momm bought it for me on my 14th birthday on grade nine. And since then I have been using it for multiple purposes such as studying and even entertaining purposes such as uh, watching movies, listening to music and playing games. But nowadays it’s showing uh, signs of uh, getting outdated. Uh, so first of all, it keeps on glitching constantly and it takes forever to boot up. And secondly uh. Ah, secondly, it is having storage problems because the uh, laptop is um, because it only has 74 gbte in which the system took up like a half of it. So therefore I couldn’t afford to download uh, further application such as auto Photoshop so that I can learn new skills and uh, store more documents. So uh, I would like to have another one that could um, that has a uh, bigger storage. And uh, third of all it is the battery. Battery problems like the battery are uh, currently running out quickly and it starts to show signs of a worn out battery.

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