Band 5+: What do you usually do on your birthday

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is partially relevant to the question, but it does not directly address what the speaker does on their birthday. The answer focuses on a birthday party tradition with friends, which is related but not a direct answer to the prompt. Consider directly addressing the question in future responses, providing specific details about your own birthday activities.

The answer is somewhat coherent, but the initial question is irrelevant and the response is slightly disorganised. The phrasing could be improved for better flow. Try to directly answer the question without unnecessary detours.

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "astonishing" are used effectively, but more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Consider using more descriptive language to paint a clearer picture of the birthday activities.

There are some grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of "traps" and the slightly awkward phrasing. While the main ideas are understandable, improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would significantly improve the score. Pay attention to articles and prepositions.