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Band 5+: Is it good to work with family members?

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In my opinion, family members bring many opportunities. Families can also have a negative impact on their business. I think families are better than disadvantaged. For example, whenever they work together, they develop a stronger response. During difficult times, they lend a helping hand.

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In my opinion, what would families member brings many opportunities? Families also have negative impact on their business. I think families are better than disadvantaged. For example, whenever they work together, they develop stronger response. During difficult times, they also lend their own hands.

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks a comprehensive discussion of the advantages and disadvantages of working with family members. Consider exploring both sides of the issue more thoroughly with specific examples to support your points. A more balanced and detailed response would improve the overall quality.

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The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's a slight lack of coherence in the initial sentence, and the ideas aren't fully developed. Try to create a clearer structure with a main point and supporting examples. Work on smoother transitions between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but some words are not used precisely. For example, 'response' could be replaced with a more specific term like 'bond' or 'teamwork'. Try to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively.

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There are some grammatical errors, such as 'families member brings' and 'lend their own hands'. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage. While the basic grammar is understandable, improving accuracy will significantly enhance the score. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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