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Band 6+: Why might famous people enjoy having fans?

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It's natural for most people to want to be loved and admired. Fame provides a unique kind of power and influence. Ordinary people might find it difficult to impress a large number of individuals, but famous people can inspire and motivate countless others. Their talent and achievements can create dreams and aspirations in young generations. Seeing someone succeed in their field can be incredibly impressive and motivating.

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Yes. Uh, most of people want to be loved. Uh, it’s so ovious. And, uh, this type of power is incredible m on people. Ordinary people can’t, uh, impress a lot of individuals is, uh, impossible. But if you are famous because of your songs or your, uh, talents, is impressed young generations and they become create dreams, uh, when you see your talent or capability, uh, as impressive and, um, amazing thing.

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Task Response

The student provides a good response to the question, highlighting the desire for love and admiration as well as the power and influence that fame brings. However, the answer could be more specific and elaborate on the positive aspects of having fans, such as the feeling of connection, the opportunity to make a difference, and the validation of their work.

Fluency & Coherence

The student's speech is somewhat hesitant and disjointed, with frequent fillers like "uh" and "um." The answer lacks a clear structure and could benefit from smoother transitions between ideas. The student could improve fluency by practicing speaking more naturally and confidently.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, including "power," "influence," "inspire," and "motivate." However, some words are used repetitively, such as "impress." The student could expand their vocabulary by using synonyms and more specific terms to express their ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good understanding of grammar, but there are some errors in sentence structure and tense. For example, "Ordinary people can't, uh, impress a lot of individuals is, uh, impossible." The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by paying attention to subject-verb agreement and using correct tenses.

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