Band 5: Describe a someone that is the real model for young one (User-Submitted IELTS Speaking Answer)

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There are many people who serve as incredible role models for young people. One person who comes to mind is a truly inspiring individual. He possesses a vast knowledge base and is a true role model for people of all ages. He has achieved great success through hard work and dedication. He is a motivational speaker and frequently shares inspiring messages on social media platforms like Instagram and Facebook. He is also known for his philanthropy, actively helping those in need. His personality is equally impressive. He is tall, handsome, and exudes a genuine gentlemanly demeanor. I first learned about him while browsing the internet. I came across a video of him helping someone in need. He actively connects those who can help with those who need assistance. He is a remarkable individual who embodies the best of humanity. His work with NGOs, which focus on aiding the less fortunate, further solidifies his position as a role model for everyone.

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There is no doubt I have a non number of person who are a real really real model for a young one. Uh that’s why I will m tell you about uh that person who have a great knowledge about everything he isra um actually I think he is a really a real model for the young one and children and old person because uh he achieved he has achiever that place um with a lot of hard work and um he is a uh motivation speaker and he always post uh on the instagram of his facebook related to the motivation and uh as well as he always helps the poor poor one that’s why I think he’s a really um real modal for uh if you talk about his personality he’s a tall handsome, look like a gentleman. If you talk about I how I know about him. That time I had a free from my hectic schedule that time I scrolling I was scrolling Internet that time I watched his video which he is um helping someone who ah have a need and um he um aware those people who um m can help other ones that’s why and um here our great personality in the world and every person a bo food looks like a himma because every old people know about um on t about the ngo he run ngo which will help poor people that’s why uh that person really real model for everyone.

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