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Band 5+: You went on a weekend trip to a nearby city and want to share your experience with a friend. Write a letter to your friend describing the trip, including details about: - the city you visited and what you did there - any interesting places you explored or activities you tried - your overall impressions and if you'd recommend the trip to them.

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Dear Ms Sekar

First of all, i wanna share my experience about my trip in the last weekend. In the last weekend i go solo trip to Malang, i go by motorcycle. Why Malang? because i’ve ever live in malang around 5-6 years, and i think Malang have something really special in my memories.

Memories about how i’m struggling to finish my university, memories about how i meet all my friend and we live together rent house to save our money. Especially i met 2 my bestfriend in malang, they come from Magetan and Gresik. We always share a lot of story about life, family, future, and little bit about love.

Now, i go to Malang alone, no one here just alone and fell empty. I go to all the place that i ever make memories with my old friends in the past. Same places but different feelings. When i go to Malang just want to reminds me all of my memories in here in the past.

Last but not least, i hope in the future i can go to Malang again with you. Malang always have space in my mind.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

malang: 8

about: 5

memories: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by describing the trip, the city, and the activities. However, more details about specific places and activities would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraphing. The numerous grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would improve the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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