Band 6+: do you prefer study or Job

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant to the question and provides some personal information. However, it could benefit from a more direct comparison of the two options (study vs. job) and a clearer expression of preference. Elaborating on the reasons behind the job choices would strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved by reducing the use of "uh" and speaking more smoothly. Try to plan your response briefly before speaking to improve coherence and reduce hesitations.

The vocabulary is adequate, but more precise and sophisticated language could be used. Instead of 'running a part-time job,' consider 'working part-time' or 'holding a part-time position.' The phrase 'subject-related job' is fine, but you could enrich your vocabulary by using synonyms like 'field-specific' or 'relevant to my studies'.

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor issues like the unnecessary comma after 'graduation'. The sentence structure is simple but effective. Try to incorporate more complex grammatical structures to demonstrate a wider range, such as using passive voice or relative clauses.